Caligula's Launderette

The first line made me think Frost. after that a mix of Wordsworth, Frost, and Coleridge. What beautiful imagery you have in such a compacted poem. My favorite part was ...

With blue braids tipped foam-green and skin the shine of the sea she glides between the caps and waves. in a moment of sponteanity she leaps and flaps her sparkle-scaled ...

the never bird gave up her nest to save a boy so keen on single destruction death seemed like a very big adventure and Heathcliff plumetted into a life long ...

THIRD EDIT...:) The Wreckage of the Tomb I thought I saw the sea of death curling over the sighing horizon and swiftly did The Dark Mortality catch the shift in ...

Jack is to blame for this, I just read perfection and was yeah all your fault, Jack, not that I mind though... CL Skin Deep the dips in your skin ...

I am not sure where to put this, whether in non-fiction or yeah cheers y'all. Rated for language... CL -------------- Chocolate and Cigarettes to Robert, Sean, Max, and Cyril (yes ...

wow...thats some really good stuff hon, I wish I could hear it sung though. I did find one typo though on line 7 - I believe odn't should be don't ...

Everybody looks smashing... Jack: But we like your face... Yoshi: oooo red eye effect... Milkybar Kid: The first one is very, very nice and oooh horsies...I love horsies... Hunter: happy ...

oooo...I hadn't thought of it that way. Oh and thanks for the spell checking, I unfortunatly don't have one, and as everyone knows here I can't spell and type at ...

Thank you Brian. About the middle two stanza's. When I figure out exactly what I meant I'll get back to you on that. I feel poetry is also on the ...

thankies GM! tata CL

Green Monkey: thankies... TBR: ooooo...thankies to you to...hahahah procrastinators unite... CL

oh god I think we all would die if this site ever went down...

10...cause it's purdy...

I love you all! e gads...I know if I start listing all my favorite people, then I will forget someone... start out with Areida Brad (Incandesence) Arvy Jack (Firestarter) PysLynx ...